what do you see
when you see darkness?
do you see fear?
spiders
clowns
death?
do you see chaos?
murder
destruction
anarchy?
do you see adventure?
new places
faces
and things?
do you see sadness?
depression
suicide?
because thats what i see
when darkness call upon me
Not very good but i wrote it so i decided to post it lol
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Last edited by Tri Poc on Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
The bottom line is I love good music and I try to shy away from all these labels that people think are so necessary to slap on music. It seems like people get afraid of a certain music if they can't pigeonhole it to their satisfaction.
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I like it. Try not to use "u" instead of "you" when writing a serious poem, though. 
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AMAZING simply FANTASTIC
that was true poetry!
i love it!
very nice job!
-DAVID
that was true poetry!
i love it!
very nice job!
-DAVID
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Just lift.
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DOH! forgive my typing speak i was trying not to do that it isnt written like that.
Thanks you guys i spent a bit of time getting it down right i have a ton of em i should make a poetry gallery
it isnt written like that.Thanks you guys i spent a bit of time getting it down right i have a ton of em i should make a poetry gallery
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Darkness is a mix of everything. It's what you pull out of it that makes all the difference.
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mathedes you are the only one who got that message from this poem. Thank you 
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im working on some others ill post soonThe bottom line is I love good music and I try to shy away from all these labels that people think are so necessary to slap on music. It seems like people get afraid of a certain music if they can't pigeonhole it to their satisfaction.
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>.< yea lol sorry i dont write in caps and forget lol
The bottom line is I love good music and I try to shy away from all these labels that people think are so necessary to slap on music. It seems like people get afraid of a certain music if they can't pigeonhole it to their satisfaction.