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Post by Tri Poc » Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:16 am

what do you see
when you see darkness?
do you see fear?
spiders
clowns
death?
do you see chaos?
murder
destruction
anarchy?
do you see adventure?
new places
faces
and things?
do you see sadness?
depression
suicide?
because thats what i see
when darkness call upon me



Not very good but i wrote it so i decided to post it lol
Last edited by Tri Poc on Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
The bottom line is I love good music and I try to shy away from all these labels that people think are so necessary to slap on music. It seems like people get afraid of a certain music if they can't pigeonhole it to their satisfaction.
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Post by Moroku » Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:36 am

I like it. Try not to use "u" instead of "you" when writing a serious poem, though. :P
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Post by tuck815 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:39 am

AMAZING simply FANTASTIC
that was true poetry!
i love it!
very nice job!
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Post by Tri Poc » Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:04 pm

DOH! forgive my typing speak i was trying not to do that :P it isnt written like that.
Thanks you guys i spent a bit of time getting it down right i have a ton of em i should make a poetry gallery :P
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Post by Mathedes » Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:40 am

Darkness is a mix of everything. It's what you pull out of it that makes all the difference.

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Post by Tri Poc » Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:20 pm

mathedes you are the only one who got that message from this poem. Thank you :)
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Post by Mathedes » Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:25 am

Not a single problem. :)

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Post by Tri Poc » Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:28 pm

:) im working on some others ill post soon
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Post by Mathedes » Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:48 am

Awesome.

Could you post the start of each line with capital letters? Haha.

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Post by Tri Poc » Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:14 pm

>.< yea lol sorry i dont write in caps and forget lol
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