my raps more coming soon

[tuck815]

thats mad encouraing new era. and thanks for the constructive critism. i will try that when i make my next one. But, i can rap up to eminem's speed sometimes so i don't know how i will do with this. i haven't ever heard anyone perform this since, well... i made it so i don't know what tone im going to go for so it may take sometime.
-DAVID

[Slim_Shady]

Ebola I hope you're kidding . Tuck I hate to say it but unless ur like 6' 3" and like super skinny I cant see this being good when you rap it. Get some more dope verses and then we will talk. But I guess I have to hear it first.

[New Era]

No worries Tuck.

Try not to rap about money, cars, girls, etc, that is sell out material. Rap about your experiences and beliefs. That's what Eminem raps about.

Also, check 'Immortal Technique' bad ass rapper. He writes about a lot of political and other stuff, but in a hardcore way.

Ignore the hate, they are just hating because you do other things than play RS, haters should make you excel and give you inspiration.


Here Tuck, if you like rapping so much I'll give you a challenge if you want...

[Gimingo]

Those were some great raps, although I agree with earlier that chorus came back too much, maybe a bit more to it? And yeah, some feeling in the raps would be nice, I'm sure you got better than this, which is just some skim stuff

[Tri Poc]

Yo tuck ive tried out spitting some of this shit with my own tones and beats ya know? And i think i may be onto something. Idk maybe

[tuck815]

i gotta here you br0 i gave wheee a concert of love the way you lie on skype earlier
-DAVID

[Tri Poc]

Yea Brahh I dont know though im just kinda getting into the rap shit and i dont got much style yet so. Yea man ill spit some of it for ya sometime if you want.

[tuck815]

gotta skype?
-DAVID

[Tri Poc]

yea but not a decent mic just the standard one on my computer.

[Ebola]

Tuck, I'm back. Time for those vids.